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Sofie2903

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Minecraft Username: Sofie2903

Discord Username: Lucas2903

How did you hear about us?(Referral Bonus): looking around for a new place from Planetminecraft.

Are you at or above the age of 18, and do you understand that this is an 18+ community?: 20 years old and yes.

Have you read over and agree to our rules?: yes.

Please rewrite OOC Rule #2 in your own words: Any form of attempted / voluntary exclusion of a group or specific person will not be tolerated. This goes for speech aswell, with hate speech, "Racism, Homophobia, language of the genre" being a bannable offense.

In your own words, describe the following:

Metagaming: Metagaming is abusing knowladge gained only ocly and not in charecter (example) your comunicating actions with another player not currently there to show up and help with posible crp/conflict to come help get you out of it.

Powergaming: Powergaming is forcing an action upon another player they dont agree with / is unfair for said player or roleplay unrealistic actions to your advantagde unbalanceing difrant situations.


Character Name: Lucy

Character Age: 57

Please write a brief description of a character living within our setting. This is a test to see your creative writing and if you understand the lore provided by the server. This part should be between 200-400 words.

Lucy is a Forest elf, a resident of Sanctuary. When she was younger, her elven parents at the time kept her safe from harm. On one outing around the farms to help them with something going wrong. Later that day, something stirred in the distance. She was told to run back to the city to stay safe even if it was without them, and they never showed back up. Years passed since then without incident, Lucy went with a group of friends to venture back out to the farms, once more as they were there something stirred, different this time however. Lucy and her group approached curiously, where they suddenly felt something strange rushing towards them. Her companions retreated homeward, but Lucy ran in another direction, unfamiliar with the terrain on that side of the field. During her escape, she tripped and fell, hitting the dirt and the creature managed to attack her and run off leaving Lucy unconscious.

When Lucy awoke, she was disoriented and amnesic, confused, blinded in one eye, with no recollection of her present or past life. She wandered aimlessly into the City until she encountered an elderly Human man who took her in like a daughter to live with him and his other son, upon finding out she ditent remember or know anything from before and helped her learn. Teaching her medical knowledge as she was also taught to fight by her brothers. Living with them.

Soon later one of the brothers disappeard. Leaving lucy behind homestead where they paths split. Here lucy worked and managed to regain her memory, yet it has been too long as a too big of a difference to return. During her search she came across notes regarding thaumaturgy, striking her curiousity as she hoped to eventually meet a thaumaturge. As by this she remained with her family, living among the other elves. Eventually her new father was killed due to unknown reasons to her. she decided later on to move out to start her own path in the city.
 
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hi there. thank you for taking the time to flesh out such a long backstory. unfortunately it is not compliant with Sonder's lore. take a look at the links i provided below, and see if you can reconfigure what you have to comply.

  1. An Intro to Sonder

one last thing, don't forget to refer to this rule when editing your backstory:

  • 6. If you’ve read these rules, please include a mention of one of the towns or cultures found in the Cultures or World Lore section on the forum in your character background on your application.

other than that, if you could also elaborate on powergaming a little more, or provide some examples to show your understanding, that'd be great.


reply to this once you're finished up, and i'll take another look.​
 
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hi there. thank you for taking the time to flesh out such a long backstory. unfortunately it is not compliant with Sonder's lore. take a look at the links i provided below, and see if you can reconfigure what you have to comply.

  1. An Intro to Sonder

one last thing, don't forget to refer to this rule when editing your backstory:

  • 6. If you’ve read these rules, please include a mention of one of the towns or cultures found in the Cultures or World Lore section on the forum in your character background on your application.

other than that, if you could also elaborate on powergaming a little more, or provide some examples to show your understanding, that'd be great.


reply to this once you're finished up, and i'll take another look.​
i cant really find anything on cultures but i just tried to extend something on how she got to Sanctuary instead- what she is i dont really know i cant find that much
 
i cant really find anything on cultures but i just tried to extend something on how she got to Sanctuary instead- what she is i dont really know i cant find that much

i suggest you take another look at the links i provided. in them you'll find that all starting characters are from Sanctuary, as the collapse of the world in prior history has made the rest of the world pretty uninhabitable.

  1. https://www.sonderfantasy.com/threads/through-the-eras.15/
  2. https://www.sonderfantasy.com/threads/npc-sanctuary.16/
  3. https://www.sonderfantasy.com/threads/introduction-to-sonder.14/

races can be looked into here. based off your current skin and description of your character, forest elves or sun elves might fit. obviously though i cannot make your character for you.

  1. https://www.sonderfantasy.com/forums/races.15/

if you have specific questions you can get them quickly answered in the questions & help section of the discord.
 
i suggest you take another look at the links i provided. in them you'll find that all starting characters are from Sanctuary, as the collapse of the world in prior history has made the rest of the world pretty uninhabitable.

  1. https://www.sonderfantasy.com/threads/through-the-eras.15/
  2. https://www.sonderfantasy.com/threads/npc-sanctuary.16/
  3. https://www.sonderfantasy.com/threads/introduction-to-sonder.14/

races can be looked into here. based off your current skin and description of your character, forest elves or sun elves might fit. obviously though i cannot make your character for you.

  1. https://www.sonderfantasy.com/forums/races.15/

if you have specific questions you can get them quickly answered in the questions & help section of the discord.

okey- rewrote basicly the whole thing keeping it as much to the idea as i could XD hope its passing
 
okey- rewrote basicly the whole thing keeping it as much to the idea as i could XD hope its passing

it is definitely getting there.

currently there would be no nearby mountains that would be survivable, since the reach of safety in sanctuary would be the last few farms. adventuring that far wouldn't be feasible. being attacked if trying works, however. most of the meat is good, you're almost there.

i noticed the quality of your writing did decrease quite a bit, like you are rushing. we're not going anywhere, please take your time and proof read.
 
it is definitely getting there.

currently there would be no nearby mountains that would be survivable, since the reach of safety in sanctuary would be the last few farms. adventuring that far wouldn't be feasible. being attacked if trying works, however. most of the meat is good, you're almost there.

i noticed the quality of your writing did decrease quite a bit, like you are rushing. we're not going anywhere, please take your time and proof read.
changed once more! no mountain just fields added more from what came to mind and danm if im tired too thats why the quality is a bit less its currently 12:37 am! "midnight if i remember correctly"
 
changed once more! no mountain just fields added more from what came to mind and danm if im tired too thats why the quality is a bit less its currently 12:37 am! "midnight if i remember correctly"

i'm going to ask you to do oneee more general revision of your backstory, hopefully not in the wee hours of the night.
 
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